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Friday 4 December 2009

CROSS THE BORDERS

cross the borders

he lives in pain

cross the borders

she lives in pain

companions of

he and she

are VAIN and PAIN

He and She couldn't become WE

as BORDERS between....

5 comments:

Tushar Mangl said...

hey title it

title-less poem achi ni lag rhi

the expression and the thoughts behind it are awesome

Loved it,

God bless you

mak said...

short but sweet...
once again as i told u...
the feelings and emotions do come out explicitly, even with the use of a very few words...
commendable piece..

Tesh said...

butiful shaista..dey r really behind d borders..
but
dey r lost in pain but living in vain..

kans said...

this one z really nice!!!!!!

Vaibhav said...

nice work ...